HELP ! ! ! - Pillow Warriors
 
HELP ! ! ! Me and my mom are writing stories to read to kids for Sunday School! We are Christians and we need a good, non-random, story WITH a moral to read to them! Please help me! It can even be just one or two paragraphs! Please either post one (or two or three or four or five or six or...) Take this one as an example:


The Beaver and the Trout

Once upon a time, there was a beaver who was building a dam in the river. He was very hard working and within a short time, he was half-way done. One day, as he was working away, a trout came along. The trout looked at the dam and scoffed out "You waste your time working on this dam, you will never block the water supply!" The beaver payed no attention to this remark and continued working as the trout went to the other side of the dam. After a whole week, the beaver was FINALY done! He smiled a big smile and went on the other side of the dam to have a good time in the water. After just a few days, the water had dried up on the other side and the trout had no water to live in anymore, but if he had just belived in going for a goal, he would have been playing along with the beaver right then, on the other side of the dam.

THE END! ! !

The moral of the story is: Persever, and you can do it.
I don't think it has a strong moral.
11/18/2009 07:32:05

Punkin

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Puppin
11/18/2009 07:53:26

I know. I wrote that in about three minutes. Please oh please try one =(

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Punkin
1/29/2010 08:22:02

ONCE UPON A TIME, THERE WAS A LITTLE GIRL NAMED SUZI. HER PARENTS WANTED HER TO EXCEL IN ACADEMICS AND BE REALLY SMART. BUT SHE WANTED TO DANCE CAUSE SHE WAS REALLY GOOD AT IT. BUT HER PARENTS STILL WOULDN'T LET HER. THEN ONE DAY, SHE CAME ACROSS $100, JUST SITTING THERE. SHE PICKED IT UP AND INVESTED IN DANCE CLASSES. HER PARENTS THOUGHT SHE WAS GOING TO A FRIENDS HOUSE. THEN ONE DAY SHE WAS DANCING AND A MAN OFFERED HER A CONTRACT DEAL. SHE KEPT UP WITH HER SCHOOL WORK AND WHEN SHE GRADUATED SHE LEFT HOME AND BECAME A STAR.

THE MORAL-CHASE YOUR DREAMS AND MAKE THEM REAL.

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Puppin
1/30/2010 04:23:47

Wow! That was actually pretty good... Wow!

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Puppin
1/30/2010 04:24:25

PUPPIN GIVE YOU 5 POINTS! ! !

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Punkin
2/4/2010 07:16:00

Thnx. I gotz amazin storeh ritin skillz.XD

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Puppin
2/4/2010 08:21:33

LOL! Puppin HAS TEA WITH POTATOES!

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Punkin
2/5/2010 06:39:13

YAY!!!!!

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Puppin
2/5/2010 06:41:10

And rootbeer floats with sugar plums!

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Punkin
2/5/2010 06:48:23

I seriously know a dude named Sunshine.

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Punkin
2/5/2010 06:48:53

but i do not live in goodville.

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Punkin
2/5/2010 06:51:13

I know, sad story. : (

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Puppin
2/5/2010 06:52:19

Somehow I don't think we should read that to 3 year olds...

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Puppin
2/5/2010 06:52:44

I have to go!

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Punkin
2/5/2010 06:54:39

You can change if you want. Bye!

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Punkin
2/9/2010 10:17:56

Okay... Here's something that happened to my teacher. Same moral.
THERE ONCE WAS A GIRL NAMED PUNKIN. SHE WAS THE MOST POPULAR GIRL IN SCHOOL, AND SHE AND HER FRINEDS MADE FUN OF THIS GIRL NAMED BUBBLEZ. BUBBLEZ WAS ALWAYS SAD. THEN WHEN THEY GREW UP, BUBBLEZ WENT TO WAL-MART AND MET PUNKIN OUTSIDE, BEGGING FOR MONEY. SO BE NICE TO PEOPLE, OR YOU MIGHT END UP LIKE PUNKIN.

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Puppin
2/10/2010 11:14:38

My mom thought that was funny =^-^=

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Punkin
2/11/2010 07:16:09

And it happen ed to my FORTH GRADE TEACHER!!! poor mrs.*******. I wonder how she's doing nowadays...

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Punkin
2/14/2010 11:33:32

HAPPY ST. VLENTINE'S DAY!!!! <3---<<<

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Puppin
2/14/2010 12:25:15

=<>-<>= Poor Mrs. So-in-so... =<>-<>= And Happy Chinese New Year!

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Punkin
2/18/2010 04:12:11

Happy Mardi Gras(and sort-of-happy Ash Wednesday!)

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2/21/2010 10:44:00

I don't really know what either of them are... And I made a new website! Click on my name to find it!

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Punkin
4/24/2010 14:20:26

Once, long ago, a girl named Little Wolf was playing with her indian friends in the woods. She was supposed to be watching her brothers, and when her back was turned, they ran off. They were never seen again.

The moral- Do what your told and have to do before doing what you like.

Also, don't run off or you'll die. :D

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Puppin
4/24/2010 14:27:34

=o-0= Woah... =0-o=
Puppin is so confused with your morals...

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Puppin
4/24/2010 14:28:30

Oopsies! I forgot to log in =)

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Punkin
4/24/2010 14:29:41

Awww...*Hugs* It's okay. I didn't understand it Either.

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Puppin
4/24/2010 14:38:03

Hugs... I am glad I am not the only one... Here! Have some hippopotimi =) And platipi! ! ! They is soooo cute =^-^= Kinda... I don't know =0-0=

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